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You are sunshine and my sorrow,
My bastion and my fear,
Casting light and hope upon me,
To illuminate my tears.

You are both captor and salvation,
My freedom and my snare,
You are terror and damnation,
And the answer to a prayer.

You are bittersweet redemption,
A false dawn unto my day,
You are everything and nothing,
Bitter joy and sweet dismay.

You are a gleaming shadow,
Misdirection and a guide.
You are the sorrowed soulmate,
That is never at my side.
©2003-2009 ~rallon
:iconrallon:

Author's Comments

Written for a girl that I've loved for a long time. Unrequited love is a difficult thing. Revised later with help from that same girl.

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:iconemopunkdoutrokr:
wow dude thats freaking awesome........i just read it and it maked me think of putting in everything to get back nothing...........its like a vision i got i know it sounds funny but its of a bank receipt reading, deposit $10000000000+current $0 = overall savings $0. over all the poem is both inspriational and beautifully written
:iconxmorningstar:
what can I say.
it's amazing.
just the way it contradicts everything, but still makes perfect sense.

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